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jode56
over 30 days ago to D. Carl Mercer

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over 30 days ago

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over 30 days ago

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over 30 days ago

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D. Carl Mercer
over 30 days ago to Kate Carpenter

Hello Kate. I am way late getting around to thanking you for the reviews of my songs "First Christmas" and "Puttin' On The Dog". Very useful and insightful for me. The verse for the karma line in "Puttin' On The Dog" goes ...

Holds a brew or two
Has a clever set of plastic tubes
Hands-free sips whenever you're inclined
Comes with cautions, dos and don'ts
Have to sign and swear you won't
Karma tends to mess with thirsty minds.

Thanks again. Dave Mercer

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Kate Carpenter
over 30 days ago

Thanks for clarification!



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Delta Burnett Reed
over 30 days ago to D. Carl Mercer

Thank you for 5*on "One Time We Cared" maybe give Art and Margie Corey a listen they have some really great stuff...Delta 🎶



Author
Randall Mark
over 30 days ago to D. Carl Mercer

Hi D Carl, Thanks so much for the kind and thoughtful review of "frostbite heart". I agree with much of what you said in the review including that it would work better as a pop song. In the last few days I put two versions of it on Broadjam.
I would love to hear your input on those if you get a chance to listen to them I don't know how to link it but just click on my name and you will see them. Hope you can check those out I think you may like them better. Different producer but same vocalist.

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Author
Kate Carpenter
over 30 days ago

Hello D Carl, Thanks for the review of my vintage song, I See a Star. Mrs. Kate

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D. Carl Mercer
over 30 days ago

Kate, Having looked at your bio and all your successes, it seems presumptuous of me to advise you on what does or does not work, or how to get a thought across in a song. Wishing you success with this song.



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Warren Hein
over 30 days ago to D. Carl Mercer

Hello sir and thanks for the thoughtful review of No Way--funny, I don't write many Country songs. So your review was pretty spot on!
All the best
Warren Hein

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D. Carl Mercer
over 30 days ago

Thanks for the kind reaction to my review. Having looked at your credentials and success with song placements, I feel like I should be getting suggestions from you instead of offering my suggestions to you. In any case, I like this song a lot. Best wishes for success with it.



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