I think your lyrics are awesome and i also love the change in the song,great job.
Excellent instrumentation and vocals. This is the kind of song that a lot of people will be able to identify with. The song concept was actually quite sad, but the arrangement, instrumentation, and vocals, made it more "uplifting" if you will. More of a tribute type song. It's definitely powerful in it's own way.
Nice short intro. Wonderful vocal performance. Nice melody, nice separation of verse and chorus melodies with good lift in the chorus. Good song structure. Great instrumental performances, especially the electric lead guitar.
Well-maintained rhyme scheme.