the drums need to sound more live and rock a bit harder to help grab and keep my attention. The guitars are good but need to be more driving- forward moving.

And the song - while valid stylistically- is not the kind of modern indie rock sound/style that people looking for indie rock like to hear

the keyboards sound great but only enhance the classic rock era sound- which is valid but a lot different than modern indie rock.

Could sound good in a retro film

A good retro 70's / 80's feel to this instrumental piece.