I like the vibe of this song/production. Kind of takes me back to the classic sound and writing of the 60's/70's... a groovy time for music/production. The big verb on the vocals gives it "that certain sound" kind of "dreaming" (hint hint) sort of feeling. That along with the clean "surfer"..."Chris Isaak Wicked Games" type lead really round out the vibe. I say, "Sure this has market potential." Just place it in the proper setting... for example a movie/scene or show that's set in this period/genre.
Nice job on this one!