The intro is very atmospheric.
I liked the contrast between the verses and choruses.
I like the almost John Lydon-like vocal phrasing in the verses.
The explosion is quite comical at the end!
Definitely original, the verse vocals have grown on me through out the song. The melody is catchy and interesting. I really love the lyrics, and the melancholy vocals work to add to the meaning. It's a good story song too, which is why I've said folk rather than pop, although the backing is "poppy".
The verse starting "Walk Down the street..." is definitely the best vocally as it sounds most believable.
Really nice track and so interesting vocals. Great job.