I really liked the lyrics. The rhythm was tight and chord structure sound. I didn't expect, but loved the chord change going into the bridge. Overall it has a lot of potential with a little revision.
Really cool song!! Lyrics are quite abstract but very engaging at the same time! Love the the use of 7th and 9th chords. Really love the arrangement, and the vocal is very authentic and heartfelt and BGs are really nice. Great job!
Really nice production. Love the sounds of the voice, guitar, and especially, the acoustic bass - good stuff! With a little more production, maybe another guitar or piano, strings, percussion, maybe this song could fit in a pop playlist as well. Very pretty song.