Very good voice quality. The song structure is solid. Lyrics are good, bringing up a very up-to-date burning topic.
A dark commentary on the current state of fear which, unfortunately, exists in our society to this day. Great job in fitting the music to match the mood on this on. Very well done.
well done in the aspects of songwriting and recording... , good singing and instrumentation, love the guitar intereplay.... timely theme - unfortunately literal take on the scene of shooting therefore is disturbing to listen to but if there was a movie or tv show that wanted to generate that hard emotion this could work--- a literal depiction of school shooting that takes you there and forces the feelings that go along with tragedy.
Fantastic instrumentation, guitar work, and arrangement. Lyrics are good. Great topic, is it marketable? I don't know. Perhaps for movie. Otherwise, a five-star sound.
nice sound 70's sounding good story