A beautiful soft Folk offering. Well sung to a very good story. Nice work on the electric guitar. Very enjoyable.
Always good stuff every time I hear you....
Here's a song of appeal: Would you be my girl? Could I be your man? Then it switches to a father/child. So this could possibly be a "proposal song" to a woman and her child...for them to become a family? Instrumentation/chord progression is easy-going and pleasant. Vocal is nicely performed. Nice production; lovely female background vocals. I really like the verse about "Would you be my child?"
Really good laid back feel to this, great vocal, well recorded and performed. I liked the way the acoustic sat in the mix with its own space, just as it should really. Nice elect break and fills, not intrusive. I liked this a lot, would do well if it fell on the right ears, but that's the holy grail isn't it! best of luck with this song and thanks.
A nice feelgood track well written and performed.
Good storyline.
Excellent guitar work.
Very pleasant, smooth unstrained voice and very lovely, heart felt lyrics.