Hawaiian flavor, feels like I am sitting on the beach soaking up the afternoon sun. Very picturesque lyrics, really takes you there. Clever tune, you have a gift.
This is a lovely song very sweet melody and style with some nice guitar and imagtinitive lyrics and fun lines as well
Nice voice
What a sad song hope it isn't from reality .....song was simple with vocal and guitar but you have a really nice quality to your vocal and I really liked your harmony it was well placed and made your sad song of some ones life stand out....good luck with this.
hear this as classic folk. nice story, comfortable tune, can hear this better production as a bar drinking tune. some clever lyrics here.
I think it is very difficult to play a simple song...simply. This is an admirable job! Clever lyrics! Kudos on this attempt.
Some great lyrics in here; a light , easy song that's inviting, assisted with the open rhythm.