I'm not sure what your intention was in writing this piece, but it seems to me that it would be a great loop to listen to while you are on HOLD on the phone. It moves along nicely, has a pleasant groove and has an uplifting feel to it...not at all boring. I am sure there are other commercial applications for this piece, but that's what came to my mind.
I love the use of 7/8 time signature, the songs show a real understanding of music. L like the use of the xylophone as the basis of the track. I like the lead synth line
Great piece to be used as background music in many different elements. Good arrangement and professional recording.
This track would be awesome for a video game menu, pretty good for as generic as it sounds. Very sellable and marketable.