Wonderful rhythm, catchy, humorous. EXcelllent melody. Good music. If I could hear all the words clearly the lyrics would have got excellent too.
I really like your song! Your cheery intro and uplifting, fun instrumentation really suited your song well. Kind of an island beat/sound that I really enjoyed, especially the xylophone or whatever that was. I liked your spoken word "brand new day". Smiles and hugs go so well together in a kids tune!