This my kind of folk song. Great intro, sweet guitar and vocals. Excellent background female harmonizing. Rich storytelling lyrics I could so relate to from my free-range childhood days...even the Catholic School story. YES! There is absolutely NO WAY to improve these well-crafted lyrics and the melody is perfect with them. If you were playing at a festival, I would definitely come to hear your set.
The acoustic guitar is nicely done and lays well in the mix. The song has some commercial potential, perhaps as source music in a movie or TV production. The electric guitar solo is very effective and not derivative of any particular performer. The mood of the song is dark. The lyrics offer a stern warning to listeners, particularly Americans. I'd like to hear more of this lyrical honesty utilized by other artists.