I'm not sure what to think of this lol I actually like it, i wouldn't put it in a playlist, only because its so unique and just wouldnt fit with any other sogs i listen to. Not much wrong with it, the production is tight and i actually do have a lot of friends that love this kinda genre.
Enjoyed the double entendre (master baiter). Arrangement, production, vocal quality all quite good. Spoken parts were humorous and fun. Came off as very Weird Al Yankovich -- if you were going for that, you definitely nailed it! Enjoyed the song and would be interested to see what else you have.
Great idea and very creative! Reminds me of Primus in some ways... great concept!!