Enjoyed the song.

You've got a good start here. Needs more depth to create more interest, rather than the solo guitar and vocal. Keep workin at it.

as rough as this is...and it's rough - I liked it.

Man, forget recording quality, arrangement, etc. your voice is telling a story, and that beats out anything ornamental. Great job. Keep on keeping it real.

Nice clear home recording, simple guitar and vocal, very easy to understand lyrics. Peaceful little song. Lyric I liked best: Giving up cigarettes, thinking 'bout gettin' pets. You've got some good word pictures in your lyrics, but they don't seem to string together to make a lot of sense.

this is a story to listen for more than a song, I mean the music is here of lesser importance.

I liked it. This song has a sense of honesty and realness and conveyed a feeling. Well done, nice piece of craft