Nice and atmospheric. Good job.

Instrumental was decent.

Pretty music!! Musicianship sounds solid to me! It has a catchy vibe!

Not a bad sound. it tends to grow on you if you listen a couple times. Short and to the point. Puts you in a mellow and laid back mood. Good instrumentation, both up front and underlying. Good arrangement.

The initial guitar track and the drum showed some promise

Perfect movie song segment.

Guys...

I really liked the idea you started out with. The guitar riff was very interesting, and original sounding. You did some different things than I am normally accustomed to hearing, even in an instrumental song. I can't quite put my finger on what form of drums and keyboard sounds you used, but I would like to offer some suggestions.

I liked the light and airy overall sound of the song.

Two minutes seemed about right to stop the piece getting too repetitive.

Some really interesting elements. Panning some of the instruments more widely could definitely help the track sound a bit less muddy. The repetition of the track was almost hypnotic at times. For something making use of so much repetition, it might have been nice to slowly build in more instrumental elements over time.

Nice little dity. I enjoyed listening to it.