Overall it just needs a better recording for me to provide solid feedback. Its a good start and I encourage you to keep writing.

This song has a nice trace feeling to it!!! This could work in a movie!!!

Like the sound of the guitar, there are interesting things in this piece of music for creating a proper song.

very nice flow

I am viewing this with no info. So, not sure if this a rough mix,backing track or finished article. The melody is fine and it's fine as a track to build on. So, what I am saying, is if it's meant to be the finished article, don't stop there. Add a melody solo or a complimentary chord arrangement to lift this to the next level.