Because this had no lyrics, I could not comment on the vocals. Would love to see what you could do with that. Otherwise, loved the guitar rifts and the hypnotic nature of this tract. I could see this being used in a movie or series.
I like the driving rhythm guitar in this one and the steady beat.
a good solid rock instrumental with a harder edge, metalica/ish
sounds good and would be good to hear with a vocalists
enjoyed
Great groove and feel, nice work on the guitars. Nice changes as it works through it's progressions.
Good for background music. Playing is solid.
I like the hook. Sounds like there is some real potential.