Melody line for me is very predictable and lacking creativity during the verses - a bit like a nursery rhyme. That said - I just got to the chorus and was pleasantly surprised. That part is great and memorable. Reminds me a LOT of the 80's English band called Squeeze.
good vibe right off the top. Good vox harmonies. i like the placement of the guitar in the mix. cool synth tones also. good lyrics.