I think this has potential. It needs to be professionally produced but there is a song in this. There is a nice melody that can be found with a singer. I feel the guitarists passion!

This song sounds very interesting. I think with some vocals on top of this it could be killer. This person has a really good feel for a song. It's like a diamond in the rough

Overall good sounding guitar. the distortion used is good for the type of rhythm you are playing. Recording is not too bad, maybe add some compression to bring out the sound some more. Good changes and transitions in the song. If you put a guitar melody over it has a little Eric Johnson feel to it. A little bland on originality, but add a melody and some other pieces to the puzzle and it will take a life of it's own.