Guitar riff is strong and catchy, reminds me of The Smiths!Can't go wrong with that!
LC Team
Very 80's sounding track with the chorus guitar work, catchy tune. Could see it getting used in either TV or on a gaming soundtrack.
Nice fun pop tune
The song has some promise. I would look to change up the melody to give more variety. It's kind of the same thing all the way through. You made a good attempt to change it up at about 2:04, but the chords don't seem to mesh with the other parts. Keep trying different combinations and you'll get something that sounds better.