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Perry Springman
over 30 days ago to Roy Elkins

Hi Roy! I was curious if you might be able to check out my page. I've been with Broadjam for three years, and though I've had a dozen or more songs in the 'considered' category, I have yet to get a song selected by a provider. I was just wondering if after checking out my page you might have some suggestions? Thanks, Perry Springman

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Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

Perry, Thanks for the note and sorry for the delay. Way behind in reviewing......I am listening to your playlist as I write. Pros: Very good songwriting, arrangements, lots of diversity in the list. Cons: It sounds as if the singer is tentative. Pitch, phrasing, etc...are all very good, but the voice sounds a little tentative. If I was producing, I would focus and work on this.

Also, sometimes great songwriting is not good for film & tv.....except when they ask specifically for songs. Watch and listen to the Top tv shows and write with your feel to those shows. You will find success as your talent is obvious. Hope this helps. If you would like to talk by phone, I would be happy to give you more input.....All the best, Roy

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Perry Springman
over 30 days ago

Hi Roy. Thanks for your comments--they are much appreciated. A couple of questions: 1. Which songs were you listening to? (I don't imagine you were able to listen to all of them...) 2. Which songs do you feel would be strongest for film, T.V., and commercials provided we worked on the vocals? Thanks again, Perry P.S. I would be very glad to talk on the phone if you have a few minutes. How can I contact you? You contact me? (604) 908-5639



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Dianne MacAdam
over 30 days ago to Perry Springman

Perry, just listened to Happy Ending. What a great song! Love your voice as well. :)



Author
Joseph Miller
over 30 days ago to Perry Springman

Nice Job on Happy Ending... had a tune "Down to the River" in the same submission...
Well done.
Joe

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Author
Perry Springman
over 30 days ago

Thanks Joseph! It's actually a pretty rough demo, but I'm glad to hear that the song comes through none-the-less. I read a bit of your bio-do you still live in LA? We get down there on tour a couple times a year.



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