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des flynn
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

Dezmond, I've added 3 more songs, if u have a few mins to spare have a listen, thanks in advance, des...



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Nick Fuse
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

Dezmond. Do what's right for You! Sending you a Friend request to help you get your plays up! Stay Cool! - Nick



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Dezmond
over 30 days ago to LuV-R

Le 'var... Glad you like my song "I will wait forever"... thanks for the thoughts in your feedback as well... much appreciated



Author
Dezmond
over 30 days ago to des flynn

Desmond,
Thanks for the feed back on my song "In My Life" today.... Much appreciated....

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des flynn
over 30 days ago

no probs mate, i enjoyed listening to your song. i hope the right people hear your work...



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Dezmond
over 30 days ago to Jelixa

Jelixa, thanks for the shoutout and great comments on my song Encore (Give me tonight)

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Author
Jelixa
over 30 days ago

You are more than welcome! I wish you the best in your music endeavors.



Author
Osea Codega
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

Hi Dezmond, thank you for the review of my song "Petals of fire", I appreciate it. I'm only the Singer on this song, the main composer and performer is a professional artist from italy, that worke with famous artist from several years. If you want to listen my songs you can find them on my profile. "Petals of fire" and "Petali di Fuoco" are the only ones where I'm not the composer, for the other ones I'm the songwriter, composer and performer. thanks for your time. Osea



well thank you so much for the nice review of THROUGH THE EYES OF A CHILD. It is an old song of mine and the mix is bad and would like to re do it at some point. It was written for my grand daughter so special to me. Thank you again::)) patti

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Dezmond
over 30 days ago

U R welcome Patti, U guys keep keep making music from the heart...



Author
AKIL WINGATE
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

Hi Dezmond. Thanks for your review of "Goodnight Grace." Greatly appreciated. Cheers. Akil

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Dezmond
over 30 days ago

Hey Akil, any time... great music



Author
The Mighty Vic
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

Dez,

Thanks for you review of my song "April showers. You are right. It needs better instrumentation. I will be tweaking a couple of the tunes I have posted and will be makeing better recordings of new tunes I am working on. This was one of the first tunes I recorded on my own. I have a coupld of other tunes on my page that you might like to check out. I liked "Missing you" on your page. Very pro sounding tune!

Vic

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Dezmond
over 30 days ago

Vic... thanks much man... and keep up the solid work...

Author
The Mighty Vic
over 30 days ago

I will. You do the same....



Author
des flynn
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

hi dezomod, thanks for your review, i appreciate very much, thank you...

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Dezmond
over 30 days ago

great work Desmond



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Dezmond
over 30 days ago to Eric Joseph Montgomery

Eric,
Just realized you had "Mirror" out there for sale :-) it's not in my fav's on my ipod... Once again great job

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Eric Joseph Montgomery
over 30 days ago

Thank you, Dezmond! That's really cool of you!



Author
Dezmond
over 30 days ago to Eric Joseph Montgomery

Eric,
Thanks for the great review of my song "Encore" am glad you like it... I am still hoping you will put a "buy" button beside your song "Mirror" I really love it - and would love to have it in play lists on my ipod :-)



Author
rp music
over 30 days ago to Dezmond

General Overview
What Genre is most appropriate for this song? R & B

What is an appropriate title for this song? your time?? (Not sure)

Song Analysis
Does this song have market potential? 3/5

Would you like to hear more from this artist? 3/5

Quality of Lyrics 5/5

Quality of the Hook 3/5

Quality of Instrumentation 5/5

Instrumentation
Quality of Vocal Pitch 4/5

Production
Quality of Recording 4/5

Quality of Arrangement 4/5

Originality of Song 5/5

Overall Rating 4/5

Positive Comments
As I writer.. I see and appreciate the quality of work in the writing... the composition is really well done... it's just that this is not entirely my kind of music

Constructive Comments
Reminds me of Kaitie Maelue, it's hard to break into that kind of genre, but if you make it.. you are always valid..

There are a lot of things that you could have commented on that you didn't, starting with the fact that the kid singing this difficult song was 5 at the time.....secondly, I don't know who this Kaitie person, but I've been told by a lot of folks that the song reminds them of "When I Was 17"....which I totally relate to!
Sorry that this is not entirely your kind of music!

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Dezmond
over 30 days ago

Rich,
There was no age attached to the voice, sorry I missed that. being associated with katie Melua is actually a HUGE compliment... she is one of the biggest UK based top selling artist around the world. I would more consider the genre to be more contemporary jazz - but that's just my two cents.... http://www.katiemelua.com/

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rp music
over 30 days ago

Musicians NEVER should get involved with genre's......that's the job of the non-musician to figure out and label (usually in-accurately)what kind of tune it is.....former truck-drivers turned music critics and 'writers' generally butcher that little detail to death...so who REALLY cares what GENRE anything is...I DON'T!.....now the kid's voice?.....its obvious that a child is singing, isn't it?.......actually, that's a big compliment right there, as apparently you DIDN'T know that it was a child (although I can hardly imagine that!).....yes, if you didn't know Jovanny, the 5 year-old vocalist, was a child then you definitely wouldn't have been thinking about his age.....although it would be fascinating to have crawled in to your head when you were 'listening' (?) to this track!



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Dezmond
over 30 days ago to Eric Joseph Montgomery

Eric,
That song "Mirror" is really good...... great job...



Author
Dezmond
over 30 days ago to Leijiah

Leijiah, Thanks much for your review of my song "I Will Wait Forever". I listened you your songs on your profile and do feel what you are doing..... keep up the solid work



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