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Lyricist
over 30 days ago to Michelle Marie

Hello!I am a lyricist.I got commended entry in UK Songwritting Contest and national prizes in poetry..I would like to propose you some of my lyrics for reading .Thanks!write me in marsidamuhaj@rocketmail.com

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Michelle Marie
over 30 days ago

Hello,

I would love to hear your lyrics. Before sending you my email, I would love to hear more about yourself. What is your style and how long have you been working on your music? Do you have a music page?

Author
Lyricist
over 30 days ago

I 've been working in poetry since 10 years old.For about a year I write lyrics .I wish to have collaboration with international songwritters because in my country they play in nattive language.My style is more fusioned with pop &ballads.Thats one of theme you may have a right vision about.

Blue waves of love

blue waves of love
moving on from side to side
drops of water on the way to my eyes
my flowery core is dancing all over the ground
to your blue air heart
in clear water going
the distance keeps growing
my feelings are flowing from your hands into the wind
and all keeps burning and turning out of space
in the space within

blue waves of love
moving on from side to side
we learned to love and to be apart
we loved no matter what... all meanings
we lost ,we found

I sweetly crumbled
in a million water drops
all over moving to that love coast
I was water
I was salt
going under, going in
through the earth and the sky within
searching meanings
searching me

(in) blue waves of love
moving on from side to side
we learned to love and to be apart
we loved no matter what...
we loved no matter what ....

they say "the quieter you become
the more you can hear"
I heard salt and love in my veins
and the sound of a teardrop over my heart
I learned love
I learned life

(in) blue waves of love
moving on from side to side
we learned to love and to be apart
we loved no matter what

we learned love, we learned life

Author
Michelle Marie
over 30 days ago

Beautiful poetry! The musical styles I write for are pop, hip hop, dance, latin, and singer song writer styles, I have never written a balad before.

Author
Lyricist
over 30 days ago

Thanks!i lI am inspired mostly from,Sia,Emelie Sande ,Lana del Rey ..

Author
Michelle Marie
over 30 days ago

I love Lana Del Rey! I am hoping to write some electronic dance tracks in the future! I have so many projects to finish ahhh!



MM: get those involved interested into making a remix/remaster. why? because (if you wrote and performed the vocal), you are worth it. CHEERS!

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Michelle Marie
over 30 days ago

Hi Peter,

I wrote, produced, mixed and mastered the piece myself and I agree, I need to remix it and re-record some tracks but I'm not quite sure if this song is worth investing more time. This was the first track I mixed and mastered so it's not professional quality.

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Creative InRoads, LLC
over 30 days ago

I stand by my previous statement. and, of course, you KNOW best what you have yet to share with the rest of us listeners.



Author
Osea Codega
over 30 days ago to Michelle Marie

Thank you for your time to review my song "Don't stop the sound". Osea

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KBUCSSC
over 30 days ago

thanks for your review it was constructive with an overall positive tone.. would love to hear your thoughts on my other tracks too!!



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