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Kirk Williams
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Hi Neil. I listened to many of your tracks and like the concepts with what you are doing. Would like to try working with you on a piece to see how we vibe and work together. Don't want to overcommit or oversale. The proof will be in the experience and outcome. Let me know if you are interested. Also, I don't feel that anything is wrong with your voice by any means. The production, mixing, etc. could just use more polish but the idea is great in my opinion.

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Hi Kirk, sorry to get back to you so late. The so gs I have up front on my page are demos I had made , not me singing. if you go into the we page 2nd page there are simple demos with me singing.

I don't have a pro set up to make demos or tracks only simple tracks, guitar and vocals. I've actually hooked up with a manager and they thinking of using some of my new songs, not on my website for an artist that's cutting an album.

That being said I haven't made a dime in. Music so far even though I have a number of songs out for licensing in libraries, they just happen not to have been used. I don't have a publishing deal, do you? Are you just looking to collaborate? Let me know do you write music or lyrics or both?



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NikiLane9134628
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

An amazing artist, i look forward to hearing more from this artist a wide range of talent!



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MinnieVillanueva1871409
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Love Lazy Moon. I can feel the moon shining all over.

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Thnak you Minnie..glad you liked the song!



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BettyBeamon9973410
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

You're awesome

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Betty, I would like to get back to you and offer any of my songs, I have some new ones for your artists, to you and label to record. Let's work something up. Any song. We can just do a fifty fifty split if that's OK But let me know what you need. I'd like to have my songs cut professionally and be out in the public to get interest and you like the songs so Its a win win

Please call
347 -515 1585



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SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Hi Neil, I saw your ad in the Market Place...Would you ever consider a 50/50 collaboration..... I build radio ready song beds for an Artist to Top Line....I have over 600 tracks on Broadjam... Check out my page. SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS Good music sells period..... if its not good = no $$$$$

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Yes, I woul defintely consider it...that why I put it out there on th emarlet place for that specidic reason.

I gte great feedback from my songs (from Taxi and from Broadjam but they are definitely sticking to the fact that they are not "Broadcast quality" and most of what is offered for opportunities are "broadcast quality" I would much rather have 50 % of something than 100 of nothing. It's just me and a guitar and I don't have the best voice I will admit so I'm not show casing the song and the lyrics etc. as well as I could.

The tracks that I did get a pro demo for sold ("My Kind of Loser" sold those one 3 times and "The Witching Hour"). I have 3 or 4 more that are "broadcast quality," but mostly they are "stripped down demos.

So I got the tunes (!!!) , I just need the demos and I don't have the money from the other songs sold yet to get them done right. I think if you listen to my tunes I think you'll agree if you take a listen (Maybe you already have)

I have a lot of country tunes that need good demos

Burning Bridges
Fall Apart at the Seems
What I Really Need
Could This be Home?
See You in Savannah
etc

Pop songs that need a Pop, rhythm and demo

Party of One
I'm not Perfect
Answered Prayer
Lazy Moon
Other Sky
3:30
Time Machine
X Marks the Spot
Fountain of Youth
Take it alletc.

Rock, jazz/ R&B, Christmas song, Childre's song, Parody/ Funny songs. I have a lot of different ones.

So let me know what you think. I've heard the tunes and demos on your page, and I think it would be a good fit. Do you have a singer who can do it? Can you do it...?

www.broadjam.com/songs/neilfergus11

Thanks buddy,
Neil Fergus
neilpfergus@gmail.com
cell 347-515-1585

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SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
over 30 days ago

Hi Neil, yes I can do it and we're having this conversation because I heard your voice. It's honest and you can't buy that. If you would call, it would be much better Thanks, Marvin
503 810 7384

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Ill give you a call later today



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Yuri
over 30 days ago to Roy Elkins

Wishing you a speedy recovery from Covid, Roy. Glad to read that you're covered with the vaccine.

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Roy Elkins
over 30 days ago

Thank you Yuri! Your note made me smile. Thanks for the lift.

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Hey Roy, I heard you has the Covid pretty good. I hope you RE FEELING BETTER AND i HOPE ALL IS WELL.

BEST, nEIL



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John Walradt
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Hi, Neil. Thank you for your enjoyment of my songs! I have listened to several of yours. "My Kind of Loser" has a classic country theme, terrific melody and colorful imagery. Many of your other songs are in the raw. So were mine, except you play guitar and sing better than I do. Did you go to a studio for "My Kind of Loser"? Not easy being on a budget but I have found ways! Also liked "Time Machine." Poignant, painful, and sympathetic. You tell stories that need to be told and you do that well.

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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago

Tnanks for the compliment Johm.. Im actually blushing? Did you have ant feedback on my other query? That is, being a prodcucer as well do you have any contact that in th music publing world, a muis producer or directly to an artist thems elves who would be in need of a dyed in the woll, bona fide HIT song that fell right into their laps?

If you do have thos e conatcts , and you may and you may not, th's why I. asking, We could work out some form fo cash agreemnet, legally -bing and with oversight ny BMI, whose sole duty is to make sure composrs of songs ( and I would register whatever sog we wher trying to sell with you as half of the composing team, so BMI is offically having to look for you up -front payments and any continuing royalty streams, thats whatthe y do.

So we;d have a contract,,ther ewould be on risk. Im think a we draw up an agreemnt for a 70/30 split which is ibdustry standard, I do believe.

Let me know whay you think Its a small, samll risk, for a very , vert possible profit. And agian, thas just an emormous prifit on ONE song, let alone hoe much you could make if your contact lired 10 or 20 o fmy 55 listed (and believe me, if you listen to one;s I wrote to yo inmy post, they will!!
Later neil Fergus
neilpfergus@gmail.com
cell :347-1585



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Neil Fergus
over 30 days ago to larrycosta9706227

Larry, by the way , I also am a screenplay writer. I have five scripts, one feature called "Below Zero" which is an Sci-fi/ Horror/ Action movie, the Thing meets World War Z, a short called, "The Tourist", a drama/ suspense film about a CIA analyst who tours battlefields and war zones like the Spartans of Ancient Greece did to review strategies, to see how people fought and died, etc. Another short is "Widow's Walk" a horror/ ghost story with a strong female lead, and another short called "Pockets," about a pair of pickpockets working the grift in NYC and they happen to pick a CIA operative's wallet by mistakes on the subway and trouble ensues, drama/ thriller. These shorts are all about 40 pages each.

My last short is really short, 8 pages and its called '8 Minutes with God" a simple film about two men having a conversation in a generic park that radically alters the course of both their lives.

If you are interested in reading any of these scripts, let me know. My email is neilpfergus@gmail.com
and my phone is 347-515-1585

The loglines and screenplays themselves are available at the following link or I can email them to you, if interested:
https://www.stage32.com/profile/901 237/scripts_screenplays

Best,
Neil
P.S., I hope you liked "The Christmas Candle!"



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Delta Burnett Reed
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Thank you for the review of the spiritual "Deep River"
🎶🎶Delta



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BobBentley9033958
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Hi Neil,
Thanks for reviewing I'll Put Your Picture Away.
Bob



Thank you for your review and constructive comments



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Kate Carpenter
over 30 days ago to Neil Fergus

Neil thanks for the review of tell the truth. Mrs Kate



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