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Testify
Think I'll do the right thing
Gonna turn you in.
Shout it out and really sing,
Gonna turn you in.
When they put me on the stand
Only one thing to do
Is Testify - Testify -Testify.

Testify you broke my heart
and swear it's the truth.
Show them buckets of my tears
To give them the prove.
Raise my hand high in the air
Like a preacher in church,
And Testify - Testify - I'm gonna Testify.
(Chorus)
You could ask forgiveness.
Admit where you've been.
Put your arms around me
Say "Won't do it again.
Tell me that you love me
Until the day that you die.
then Testify - Testify - Testify
(inst.)
You made a change in my life
For better or worse.
Have you right beside me
Until I ride in a hearse.
Stand up at my funeral
Say a few words.
Testify - Testify - Testify.
(Chorus)
You could ask forgiveness.
Admit where you've been.
Put your arms around me
Say "Won't do it again."
Tell me that you love me
Until the day that you die.
then Testify - Testify - Testify
testify-testify-testify



please add lyrics to testify in order for me to give a complete review...thanks Bob Dellaposta



Ron, please add lyrics to Testify. Thanks Bob Dellaposta reviewer



William,
please add a lyric to your review submission...thanks Bob Dellaposta

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Author
William Smith
over 30 days ago

Sorry
William Smith

Verse 1
Sorry's a word that's often misused
It's ok if you bump someone and want to be excused.
Even if you hurt someone thst you didn't mean too.
sorry should be qulified by what you say or do.

Verse 2
You can't say your sorry
for throwing a rock throuh my window.
or when the dents in my car
match the hammer in the drawer.
can't say sorry for stealing someone elses money
cause when you do the words fall to the floor

Chrous
You say your sorry, but your only sorry you got caught.
In all the little lies that you hoped that I forgot.
Sorry doesn't take away the shame
and all the lonely years, you'll always be the same.
Sorry doesn't fit here

Verrse 3
I've moved on nothing left for me here.
I walked away from pain of bad memories.
But you still say your sorry--maybe now its true

Chrous 2
Sorry doesn't fit here, your only sorry you got caught.
In all the little lies that you hoped that I forgot.
Sorry doesn't take away the shame
and all the lonely years, you'll always be the same.
Sorry doesn't fit here



Paul, Please upload the lyrics to be evaluated with the song or send me the lyrics in an e-mail to my3kidsmusic@comcast.net thanks Bob Dellaposta

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Author
PaulReidy6922793
over 30 days ago

Hello, I'm emailing the lyrics to you in about 30 seconds.



Hi Robert, Sorry for the late response. I was out of town. How would you like to receive the lyrics?

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Author
Ellen Hayes
over 30 days ago

Hello Robert,
I just posted the lyrics to both songs in each song description area.

thank you...i will review them tomorrow...if they transferred that should be fine...i'll let you know asap

I don't see any songs to Evaluate or critique but the page says I have two but where are they?? help

Author
Ellen Hayes
over 30 days ago

Hi Robert, I sent 2 songs months ago and you never responded. I tried reaching out and so did Broadjam but there was no reply on your end. So they sent me a refund.

sorry about that...end of the semester at the college I teach at....I'm done teaching for the summer...I apologize for not responding faster...Bob

Author
Ellen Hayes
over 30 days ago

So are you available now for reviews?



send me the lyrics please



Hi Robert, I couldn't find a way to email you privately! I am forever grateful for your wonderful review of "Treasure The Moment" the other day and would like to take you up on your offer to sign this track as a non-exclusive. I've just finished several more variations/edits. Hope to hear from you. Just in case I can't see this in my Broadjam messages, my email is dbcomposer@live.com Kind regards, David Banks

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my3kidsmusic@comcast.net
David, what libraries or online placement companies do you belong to and what pro are you affiliated with BMI/ASCAP/SESAC?



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