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Thanks for reviewing I'm Fly Instrumental... if you'd like to hear the artist it's on our page under I'm fly or check out our artist page at www.dngmusic.com under Zonje... and let us know what you think
Do you listen to rap? if so or if not...listen to my 3 tracks and let me know what you think. thanx!!!
Dont know if you neccessarily like rap but can you check out my songs and give me some feedback on them. I really want "Girl I Betcha" in a movie or on a soundtrack somewhere
K...In honor of the Ohio Players and Love Rollercoaster samples that are used throughout this song, I will use 70s style language in this review, so here's the Skinny Lowdown. Overall, this song is Bangin' & Bad (70s for really good). Love the groove of this, lots of energy. Really Down with this. You can't listen to this within rockin' back & forth. "You never met a player like me" is delivered perfectly. Vocal and lyric delivered with a "melodic rap feel", love it. In fact, the delivery of the rap has a "reggae-like" feel at times. Rapper and vocalist are Right On. Sound selection, production and samples are Killer. Very well done. Constructive feedback: Song fades in until about 9 seconds. Thought for a minute there was something wrong with the Record. Intro is a little awkward. If it was my production, I would start this at 18 or 22 seconds and lose the intro as it adds nothing to the song. Samples from Love Rollercaster at 26, 1:04 and other points. Groovy. It seems that each part fades into the next without giving the dynamic change a chance. If this was my production, I would experiment with the dynamics from verse-chorus-verse-chorus, etc. Don't let each part Bogart the next one. Although musically it's not, It does feel like the part is fading into the next one. For example, at 59 seconds, it moves from the" Eminem like" rap to the "melodic rap feel". I would try cutting it off and maybe even a complete break/rest before the next part begins. Not sure if this would work, but I do think there needs to be a more distinct cutoff point between each part of the song. Another example is the phrase from 1:12 to 1:36. The energy in this phrase is Slammin', produced extremely well, but it simply fades into the next. Try cutting it off and let that low end voice enter cleanly without any leftovers from the previous part. Ending is little awkward as well. Doesn't really conclude. Maybe some bumps at the end of the song. Overall: I'm really Down with this and would love to hear any re-wor of this. If this was my song, I wouldn't change any of the vocals, instrumentation, sounds, parts, etc. You nailed it....I would re-work the intro and outtro and tighten up the transitions between the parts of the song. Great work. Hope this helps, Roy PS - I used to love the Ohio Players, O'Jays, Sly, etc. Thanks for makin' me smile today.
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Thanks for the review of "Shake Da Walls" Remix ft. E.D.S. i appreciate you giving your honest opinion, but what killed me was when i seen this. You are in the peach state and don't dig it...Wow!!! fam still got madd love foe ya cause you have your points in the dog fight....Sam Rawsteen