I like this sound. Well sung and good arrangement.

who, power pop, like the beat, like that i can HEAR the lyrics (mostly) good instrumentation...but one thing

This may have some market potential for some audiences, and although fairly well done, I don't feel it is as distinctive creatively as it needs to be to be set apart from others in this genre.
But since my background is in symphonic band composition, I'm probably not a very good judge.

Sounds marketable for a young demographic, probably teen or tween. Nice pace to the song. Energetic. Vocals, music, and recording are all tight. Probably could be recorded by other contemporary artists or maybe for usage in youth oriented programming or commercials.