ok, sounds like the byrds back in the 70s. nice job on getting that sound!
I really liked the overall feel you created, a kind of lush, folk/rock "Byrds" sort of jangling thing. Your lyrics were quite original and also not terribly needy/codependent/whiny like so many love songs. I appreciated the bridge in the middle, it really allowed me to refresh my ear and brain from the repetitive chord progression of the verses.
Very good! Nice smooth flow... love the duet!
The music sounds dated, which is fine if that is what you are going for. Has a 60's or 70's feel to it. Quality of recording sounds good