This is a tough one to review as a composer that works with live performers and actual orchestras. I know the limitations of our self expression is often limited by our tools. I feel like you're here because you love music and want to do well. In constructive comments I will recommend some software to do just this.

Extended classical style piece, very vibey.

I liked the mix of instruments you chose. I also liked the theme at 1:00.

Didnt grab me at the beginning,I was waiting for something to happen but it didnt

I did not connect with this piece at all sorry

Nice job with the instrumentation keep up the good work

interesting composing, Might be good for an abstract place in a film needs a better recording.

Lots of potential in this melody. I can definitely hear it in a movie soundtrack! Lovely work of violins with variation in a very well composed melody.

Sort of a piece for a ballet.

Enjoyed listening to the track.

The arrangement is good and also the playing is convincing for what seems to be a live recording. I see a journey in a medieval/fantasy setting with dramatic scenes and a hero who does not want to give up until his or her mission is fulfilled. The melody is catchy and the arrangement helps conveying this sense of epic struggle.

I like the motifs used in this construct. I actually want to take this song and redo it. As time permits, I think I will, and send it to you somehow. I do like the use of the sitar synth, and if it was re-produced, that's something I would keep certainly.

I like the composition. I also think the use of dynamics is exactly what this piece needs. I wouldn't change any of that.

I believe there is enough material in this musical construct to make a really great piece of work.

Now comes the challenge of carefully putting it together.

The difficulty in using synthesizers, for all of us, is making choices between sounds that try to emulate an instrument, and using sounds that are synth-based and evoke a specific instrument. The strings, to my mind, should be better string samples, or something more synth-based.

A nice track. very musical with good changes in tempo, dynamics. The instrumentation is good also.

A unique and beautiful piece. Great work.

I believe this is a quality song let down by a particularly poor recording of it. It is imaginative and original with some interesting instrumentation - orchestra and sitar!

I could see this as video game music. Nicely dramatic and nice sounds.

Interesting sound!
Would suite good in some horrormovie.

some good ideas, but the production hurts this allot. can't really comment positively, though some ideas that don't ramble are there, it's hard to recognize them though with this production quality and lack of writing cohesion and overall structure.

Thank you for this beautiful musical number. The light almost-pizzi strings in this piece are well done.

Hmmm.... I could hear some potential but...

Has a nice Avant-garde feeling to it. The flow is nicely done. Always love strings...

thanks for letting me hear you practice...sounds noodly and poorly produced....